Hi everyone! Welcome back to the Writerâs Nook. Last week was mostly for introductions and to give yâall an idea of what to expect from this blog, but this time weâll get right into it! Today letâs talk about characters!
If youâre anything like me, you probably love creating characters. We love to imagine them, we love to throw them into various situations, but actually writing them? Ughh donât make me do it. Someday someone will find a way to precisely copy an image from our minds onto a piece of paper and then weâll all be happier, but until that day, hereâs some tips on where and how to start when youâve got a character rattling around in your brain who wonât quiet down until youâve done something with them.
I usually start with the basics: Name, age, gender. Easy peasy (unless youâre like me and spend an hour on a name generator website trying to find exactly the right one).
Next, we add a bit more depth: General appearance (skin, eye, hair color/style), hometown/nationality, family members. Still easy, but these steps start to build a world around your character, rather than having them chill in an empty void in which only they exist.
Now you gotta use your brain: Motivation, goals, values. Your characterâs motivation is what drives them toward the goals they want to accomplish. Why are they doing their thing? Are they doing it for themself or for someone else? And how does that change throughout the story?
Their goal is the thing theyâre fighting for, what theyâre working toward. It can be anything from working up the courage to ask someone to prom, to finding a legendary artifact to save the world. Whatever it is, however big or small, your character should have a strong goal that leads them through the story ââ and be prepared for that goal to change as they go.
Your characterâs values are what they wholeheartedly believe in, their unshakable worldview (but spoiler alert, it will probably (definitely) be shaken). Their values contribute to the motivation pushing them toward their goal. Throughout the course of your story, these values will be challenged, doubted, and possibly rethought. And that also means their goals might change too. In the novel Iâm writing right now, my main character begins the story by following a prophecy that he thinks will help save his brother, but by the turning point of the book he finds a new, wider goal, which also requires him to question his values and shift his motivation. So while your characterâs underlying motivation might not change, thereâs a good chance their story will require them to set aside their original goals for the sake of the plot ââ which will also give them new, additional motivations.
Character growth happens when the character encounters something that forces them to broaden their perspective and set their personal wants/needs/goals aside. I know itâs basic and old news, but think of The Hunger Games: Katnissâs original goal is to survive the Games. Her motivation is her sister. But when she becomes the face of a rebellion, her motivation shifts. Itâs no longer just about Katniss and Prim; itâs about all the kids in Panem who have been forced to fight in the Games. Her perspective shifts, and she begins to fight for everyone rather than just herself. You can see the same formula in pretty much any book you read.

The main point is, your character needs strong values, motivations, and goals in order to be the most authentic type of character. The hardest part of writing anything is making sure your characters read like real people, and one of the ways I double check for that is reading my dialogue out loud and acting out my charactersâ actions. Itâs a simple trick, but it really helps you see if your dialogue sounds clunky or if youâve had your character set down the cup they were holding like 3 times. Think about whether your dialogue sounds like something someone would actually say ââ it can honestly make or break the authenticity of your characters.
Speaking of authenticity, I also want to offer this tip: if you try to force your characters to do anything, they WILL NOT listen to you. I know I sound insane but hear me out: your characters have this funny way of taking over their own stories. You don't control them, they control you. So let them. Let them lead you where they want to go, even if it interferes with your plans. They're like little wind-up toys: you can set them in the right direction but they'll run around everywhere and bend the story in ways you didn't expect. And a lotta times, that's a great and magical thing.
I just threw a lot of stuff at you, so letâs back up for a second. Again, your characterâs goal doesnât have to be something earth-shattering. If youâre writing a short story, their goal might just be to walk home from school or go downstairs for breakfast or buy a snack from the store. It can be literally anything and it absolutely can be simple. Itâs a matter of asking your character what they want (and it might take them a bit to actually give you an answer, if theyâre stubborn like some of mine). Then once you know that, ask them why they want it ââ thatâs where the motivation and values come in.
Hereâs the fun part. I like to be mean to my characters. Iâm usually not sorry about it. So my favorite thing to do is dangle their goals in front of them and say âHey look! Itâs right here! Youâre so close!â and then yoink them away. There are times when your character wonât reach their goal, and that is the absolute best time for them to second-guess their goal and ask if that was what they really wanted. Losing their goal might be their rock bottom, their absolute lowest part of the story. But itâs FUN because it forces your character into a corner that only they can fight their way out of by rethinking what they want. By keeping your character from their goal, youâll learn something about them and theyâll learn something about themself.
So, to wrap up, hereâs my personal go-to basic character sheet:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Race:
Nationality:
Hometown:
Family:
Friends:
What do they value?
What do they want?
Why do they want it?
Once you have those things down, hey guess what! You have the barebones of your characterâs leg of the plot. Thatâs a big step! Repeat this for every main character, and see how they tangle together. Itâs REALLY fun when your characters have goals that directly conflict with each other.
On that note, I wanna give a little disclaimer about these blogs. Obviously this is not the only way to create a character. Obviously Iâm not the ultimate authority on writing. Iâm not telling you the rules to making characters or writing a story. These are just tips and guidelines that have helped me along the way, and Iâm hoping theyâre helpful to you guys too!
So by all means, break the rules. I dare you.
Thatâs all I got for yâall today, but I hope you found that info useful! Before I go, Iâll give a little update about what Iâve been up to these days.
What Iâm Writing:
Iâm in the midst of revisions of my YA fantasy novel called A DECEPTION OF DEMONS. Itâs a vaguely Beauty and the Beast inspired story with a shapeshifting prince and a boy who can talk to deities. Fun times. Iâm also working on the sequel, which has been rough. Itâs a hot mess, but thatâs what first drafts are for!
What Iâm Reading:
Just finished: I have not actually finished a book since last weekâs post, oops
Currently reading: I am almost done with ALL THE STARS AND TEETH by Adalyn Grace. Itâs REALLY good. I love it. Thereâs cool magic, a charming sort-of pirate and his magic ship, a kickass main character, and a mermaid!!! Itâs such an immersive story that has me hanging onto every word. I read most of it in a day, and now Iâm procrastinating finishing it because I donât want it to be over and I donât want to wait a year for the second book đ
Starting next: I think my next read is going to be THE DEVOURING GRAY by Christine Lynn Herman. One of my friends has been pestering me to read it for like a year, so I think itâs time I finally listen to her!
Thanks for reading this ramble of mine, and Iâll see yâall next week with some more writing tips! Try out that character profile exercise and see what you come up with. Also, if thereâs a specific topic youâd like me to talk about, leave it in the comments!
Till next time,
Anna đâđ»